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Megans English Lesson1

Post by Misa Misuya on Tue Feb 09, 2010 3:44 am

Okay, so, some of you are still learning, which is fine. However, i wished to help you along the way. Start with a simple lesson in Dialogue.

When working with dialogue, you obviously use Speech marks when someone is talking.

"Hi, my name is Bob!"

If someone else is in the convosation, you use seperate lines for speech and descritpion.

Misa walked up to Bob and asks, "What are you doing here?"
Bob turned around and replied, "Eating your biscuits!"
Misa snarled,"You evil BIZATCH!..."

See what i mean? Also, notice the commas before the speech, this only works with something like this. If the description describes something else It will be a full stop.

Misa made a sandwich. "Mmm, cheese."

Easy as.
Haha, random! x]
Put it all together!

Bob entered the Black thorn Halos' base, noticing the large flashing panal. "What is that? Looks...advanced."
Misa rams her arms out to the large doors, noticing the man.
She walks up to bob and asks, "What are you doing here?"
Bob turned around and replied, "Eating your biscuits!"
Misa snarled,"You evil BIZATCH!..."

olololol. Sorry, but speech annoys me. Always make it clear to people that your character is talking, if you don't get all this, use a different colour or use (-)
-What are you doing here?
-Eating your biscuits!

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Re: Megans English Lesson1

Post by Josh on Tue Feb 09, 2010 9:44 am

I hope this works.

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Re: Megans English Lesson1

Post by Jordan on Tue Feb 09, 2010 9:56 am

I knew all this I just did not do it in the Rp But ill do it now Smile

Meg since everybody older then me and Im in Set 1 in english(Dunno about Cass) I think your next lesson should be harder things...

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Post by Ruio on Tue Feb 09, 2010 10:55 am

lol megans the oldest but then im in top to and i still dont Say things right i rather abreviate than pronounce Sorry megz and do it for cass and jordan cuse they will listen well look.
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Post by Misa Misuya on Tue Feb 09, 2010 3:16 pm

Josh, it was mainly for you anyway! LISTEN TO MY WORDS! I spent ages typing this! =3
And yeh jord, i'll add more harder stuffs. If anyone needs stuff checking over, post it on here, we can all have a lookey. x]

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Post by Ruio on Tue Feb 09, 2010 3:18 pm

But I Hate English Anyway So Why I Dont Like It And I Do Very Well in It Which Is Crazy Considering I Hate It O_O
I Will Learn To Speak One's Proper English When I Am Of Well Attitudes Now Please Excuse Me From One's Chat I Must Partake In Other Matters.

Lol That Good Enough For Ya?
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Re: Megans English Lesson1

Post by Jordan on Wed Feb 10, 2010 12:46 am

Ok Meg!

In English im writing a letter about that Ethuasmin(Or how ever you spell it) should be legal!

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Post by Josh on Wed Feb 10, 2010 9:50 am

Euthanasia*

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Re: Megans English Lesson1

Post by Roland on Wed Feb 10, 2010 10:01 am

I swear it is ?
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Post by Josh on Wed Feb 10, 2010 10:02 am

Its currently illegal in the UK but not in other places like the Netherlands (I think)

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Re: Megans English Lesson1

Post by Roland on Wed Feb 10, 2010 10:05 am

yeh switserland. or something, In the news recently this mother was tried for murder for switching off her daughters life support machine.
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Re: Megans English Lesson1

Post by Jordan on Wed Feb 10, 2010 11:41 am

Yep its true and compleatly stupid...Hopfully I can change there minds Smile

Could someone send me a link of a about 3 real storys on it...that could make it become more legal?

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Post by Josh on Wed Feb 10, 2010 11:56 am

This is Chantal Sebire, a french woman who lost the court case of her plea to die. She then went to switzerland to carry out the euthanasia.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chantal_S%C3%A9bire

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Post by Jordan on Wed Feb 10, 2010 12:45 pm

Oh sorry I meant in England.

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Re: Megans English Lesson1

Post by Misa Misuya on Wed Feb 10, 2010 3:24 pm

Josh (luca), no, thats not good enough. For a few reasons. YOU HAVE CAPS IN EVERY LETTER, And no real use of punctuation. Therefore, it, once again, makes no sence to me. Razz
I will have to correct it again.
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Post by GawdStix on Thu Feb 11, 2010 3:06 am

Right.
Megan.
A lesson for you.
In school and Poop!,
We were always taught this.

Flicking his robes down upon the ground,
''I'll tear your face off'', he whispered, while smirking to himself.

Note that the speech starts on a new line. =]

Also.
The Swiss have started 'helping' people commit euthanasia. By injecting lethal chemicals through their body, the die almost instantly.
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Re: Megans English Lesson1

Post by Misa Misuya on Thu Feb 11, 2010 5:00 am

Good Scott. xD

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Re: Megans English Lesson1

Post by Ruio on Thu Feb 11, 2010 7:43 am

:l Ima Not Watch This Post Anymore XD
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Post by Misa Misuya on Thu Feb 11, 2010 11:15 am

...you should. :>

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